Tuesday, 18 August 2020

Vinuka has shared some writing from home



Wonderful detail you have added to this piece of writing Vinuka.  Great capital letters at the start of the sentence and full stops at the end.  I wonder if your animal is a rabbit?

Also you have said that you have been practising your word lists and you know List 7 now!
This is fantastic Vinuka you are progressing very well. 
Ka pai! Mrs Edmonds is super proud of your effort.

4 comments:

  1. I am impressed with the detail you have added to this piece of writing Vinuka. Good to see capital letters at the start of the sentences and full stops at the end. Was Mrs Edmonds right that your animal is a rabbit?

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  2. Great to see you practising some writing and your word lists at home Vinuka. You have remembered the sentence rules and produced some very neat work. I am so happy to hear that you know list 7 now, keep working hard and you will soon have learnt them all!

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  3. Good morning Mrs Edmonds.Thank you for your comment and you are correct. It’s a rabbit . Vinuka

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  4. Thank you Mrs Edmonds for posting my writing and your lovely comment.
    Thank you Mrs Venville ,Mrs Edmonds is correct . It’s a rabbit.

    Thank you Mrs Jackman for your comment .

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